There are seven different kinds of sentences in this writing.
See if you can spot all of them!
The spooky door (by Scarlett Ion)
I hadn’t seen the door before. It wasn’t there last night. Cautiously, I turned the handle. When I opened the door, I fainted. Then I woke back up. I walked in and it was like a nightmare shining through my eye. I could see lots of killer clowns hunting through my soul. They were like my mum and dad being really angry at me. Suddenly I heard my brother yelling “look out Scarlett! and I fell. I fell into a deep hole. It was like my room but floating somewhere. When I landed I saw my cat. I said hi but he hissed back at me. I wondered why and then he looked back and he had no eyes left in his eye socket.....
- The Writing Team (Scarlett, Sophie L & Georgia)
Such exciting writing! Wow, some of the sentences are giving me chills up my spine! I'm not sure I will ever look at clowns the same way. I might have to sleep with the light on tonight. :-() Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome descriptive story you have written team .
ReplyDeleteIts quite scary in parts too, keep up the great work
Dianne Lysaght